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Write A Flash Piece About Someone Who Leaves A Permanent Mark On Another, Emotionally Or Physically: The Mark Someone Leaves Behind (Flash Fiction

  • Dec 8, 2025
  • 2 min read

Abstract black and white geometric design with lines and dots extending from a central diamond shape against a plain background.

He left a mark on her the first night they met.

It wasn’t a kiss. It wasn’t a touch. It wasn’t even a moment she could fully explain.

It was a sentence.

He said her name like he’d already memorized it — slow, deliberate, tasting each syllable like it mattered. Like she mattered.


No one had ever said her name like that. No one had ever looked at her like she was a choice instead of a coincidence.


That’s when it happened — the mark. Invisible, but deep.Not something she could see, but something she felt every time she tried to forget him.


Later, there were actual marks. His hands on her skin, not harsh, but certain.A thumb tracing her jaw.A fingertip pressing into the hollow of her hip.The faint impression of his mouth against her shoulder, the kind of kiss that lingers long after the lips are gone.


People talk about marks like they fade. Like time erases everything.

But there are some people you can’t scrub out of your bones.

He was one of them.


She thought she’d move on — that she’d grow out of him, grow past him. That everything he left behind would eventually turn into nothing more than an echo.


But every time she laughed, she remembered the way he admired the sound. Every time she lied and said she was fine, she remembered how he saw straight through her. Every time she looked in the mirror, she saw the girl he’d coaxed out of hiding — the girl who dared to want more.


And the worst part? She didn’t even resent him for it.

He changed her. Marked her.Ruined her for anyone who wasn’t him.


She knew her heart would heal — hearts always try to heal — but it would never go back to its original shape. It had molded itself around him, reshaped by his presence, his tenderness, his gravity.


Some marks aren’t scars. Some marks are reminders.


She carries him the way some people carry constellations — quietly, secretly, beautifully. Not as something lost, but as something earned. As proof that she lived, that she felt something real, something too powerful to fade.


He is gone.

The mark is not.

And somehow, that feels like love too.


B.A.R.


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